In art we have been working on Michael Mew inspired media art. Our art had to include:
A focal point
Leading lines
A bird
We had to add a bird to represent our cultural narrative. The bird that I chose is a Mohua.
I think to improve my work, next time I could plan it out better and fugure out where everything is going to go before I do it.
My focal point is the face because it's much larger than anything else and they grey makes it stand out more.
My leading lines are the edges around the yellow and the yellow cracked line leading up to the other yellow. Maybe the edges of the face too.